A girl called Rose lived near a dark forest. No one ever went there because it was really scary but Rose wasn’t scared of anything .One day she went in the forest when her parents were at work.
She brought some food to nibble on. She sat by a very large oak tree and ate her food.
All of a sudden out of the corner of her eye she saw some steps so she went down the steps and at the bottom of the steps there was a magical land full of lollies! It was paradise she ate and ate. it was the best day for her!
No wonder she wasn’t scared. She had a great time!
pretty good job. i like how you included candy land
This is a great 100 Word Challenge, i think that you could of used more describing words to help paint the picture a little bit better. It was a great story seeing that we only got a picture not a phrase. I think you put a great amount of effort in to create this 100 word challenge. It was very interesting
Tim
I really liked your story!
It would be so cool to be in a magical land of lollies!
great job!
Jasmine
From England
Maisie this is a very fun, creative piece of writing! A magical land full of lollies sounds lovely…
Remember to always use capital letters at the beginning of each new sentence.
Otherwise, great work! 🙂